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Friday, May 28, 2021

Final Draft - Descriptive Writing - My Mum

 WALT to write a description of our mum using precise words to create an image in our readers minds.

I’m going to introduce my Mum Brenda, she has sparkling blue eyes and likes to wear dresses. She  is tallish. We go walking  on the farm She absolutely  loves coffee. I help her  do  gardening. I help her clean the house. Mum likes to read to me. We bake  delicious banana chocolate chip muffins. Mum takes us to swimming and soccer training. We like to go to McDonalds  together.

Mum likes to watch  Country Calendar and aXe Men. Mum likes to come home after a busy day at work She cooks delicious dinners that I enjoy.  Mum takes me to nans house for afternoon tea .Then we go home. she lights the fire and we  sit by the fire and watch Outback Truckers and The chaser. mum screams  in delight when the chaser wins. She gets a little mad when me and Cameron fight but I still love my Mum even when she is mad.

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